Hook Us With Your First Page # 2

Here we go with First Page Entry #2!

This first page comes from urban fantasy writer, Jen Nipps, and comes from her WIP titled "Shadows of Stonehenge."

So, what do you think? Does it hook YOU? Let Jen know by commenting in the comment box below.

Chapter One

Shrouded in mystery and mysticism, there is yet another side to the mythical Stonehenge. A shadow side. A side most people know is there but refuse to acknowledge.

This night, a night with no moon, a figure approached the great monolith at the head of the circle of stones. It seemed to walk through the stone but did not emerge on the other side.

"I need to see Trevor,” a voice rasped, seeming to come from under the stone.

A window panel slid open, revealing modern electric lights before being blocked by the person on the other side. “Password?”

The figure swore. “No time! I need to see Trevor.”

The visage on the other side of the panel never wavered.

“Fine. Gaisgeach,” he spat.
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